Katelin

The best class ever we are the surfivers!
 [[image:HOMEWORK_WIKKIS[PACES.001.jpg height="600"]] We are the most coolest classroom ever because we are a bunch of happy kids who are ready to learn each day. We have the most coolest subjects like music,Pe,sports, dance,productions,art also pet days,agri kids,cross country and many more. Our classroom is a safe and fun environment to learn and our displays are colourful and out there.We are surrounded by a country area with trees and farm life. We have enjoyable lunch and breaplaces that we can hang out like the tennis court, playground, back field ,sandpit,bark chips and many more.Our teachers make learning fun by having hands on activities that get our brains working. We also get offered fun and enjoyable oportunitiess to express ourself. Mr Dodunski(Mr D) has encouraged us to become better writers during the past few weeks. He has taught us how to write a descriptive and deeper meaning recount. Here is some of them below.

Soccer Reccount The sun shone. The trees waved at me.The oozing mud crept through my toes.

I can't believe we made it to the soccor finals. I felt over the moon. The geometrical shape ran to me asking me if it could be kicked into the goal. Eyes like puppy dogs eyes stared atme as I stretched out my legs.I took a shot. The ball smiled at me.

The body's ocean The sun glistened as I stared at the water sunbathing in the rays. I pulled the handle of the rusty old rundown canoe. My toe touched the icy cold water in search for success. I paddled with integrity. The water parted like you part your hair,dividing into two halves of the sea. It was like stay on your side or face the wavy consequence. I was glad I did not see the beanbags shape shifting across the sky cause otherwise they would have blocked the sun. A song of nature played as I passed a quilt of bush to my right. White pebbles of flour covered an island as I gracefully stared at the hairy,circled spiders hanging from the coconut tree. I could tell the sun was going to fade away soon though. Cause all of sudden cold hearted pimples started to appear along my arms and tears from heaven dripped with sadness. A breeze passed me which blew my silky hair. The all of a sudden a mouth appeared out of the water and covered me in siliver as I was knocked down to the bottom of the pool floor. Then all I could see was pitch black.

Becoming centre of the stage I stared at the beaming lights straight ahead of me. I took a big breathe almost to big though. My heart had stage fright. I read the unforgetable words that were scrambled on my page. It was going on and on about Romeo and Juliet. I opened my mouth but nothing came out my mouth was blank just the left overs from my big breathe came out. Eyes of horror stared at me as my mouth was open and my body was as still as statues. Then with all joy I had in my body I read the script. Yes indead. I did. I read it with happiness and sadness as I acted out the the romance words. Then all of a sudden

there was cheering. But all that I was focused on was the four words that came from the judges mouth "You got the part."

My gift from me to you

My love for you I will share Cause deep inside I am very sincere Cause my gift to you was not fair So whisper in my ear and tell me how much you care

Hatchet review

How would you like to be in a plane crash,plus be stranded in a forest and get attacked by a moose when there is an tornado?

Well that is excatly what Brian aged 13 was threatend by after his plane crashed in the forest while travelling to see his dad. He was forced to create a shelter before nightime and starved for a few days before he gave in and went hunting. He acomplished some amazing survival skills there like he made a bow and arrow to hunt, a fire to keep him warm and shelter to protect him from the harsh and boiling weather ahead of him. He survived eating berries, rabbits and moose.But will these skills keep him alive? So if you want to know more read the hit selling series "Hatchet."

The three little sisters and the Big bad Ronald McDonald

Once upon a time there was three silly sisters named Hello Kitty, Pinky dinky and Goosey lucy .On Christmas eve the silly sisters were old enough to go out to the open world and explore the world. Mrs Hello Kitty said “its time for you to leave but beware of the big bad Ronald McDonald”. The mother kissed them all and sent them off remembering what their mother had said .The first little sister set off and found Mr Clucky. Hello it asked very nicely if she could borrow some straw to build a Mickey mouse club house. The man agreed to give Mickey mouse the straw, so he politely gave her the straw. Then she went of and built her house, but no longer she was finished her club house. Suddenly rat ta tat tat at the door she asked “who is it” the stranger replied the big bad Ronald McDonald now let me in “not by the hair of my chinny chin chin” then ill huff and ill puff and blow your mickey mouse club house down. The little girl just said no just no. So as he said he said he blew the house down and he gobbled her all up. One day the next little sister meet Mr Koala selling some sand Pinky Dinky asked very nicely may I please by some sand. The man thought she was nice so he gave her the sand for free. So as she skipped along the foot path she found a lovely place to build her sand castle house. Once she had finished she heard a shhh shhh at the door. She replied” who is it” your mother, pinky dinky was surprised her mother was here so she jumped of her chair and opened the door. In one second she was gobbled up by the big bad Ronald McDonald. The next day the other little sister Hello Kitty meet Mr Dork who was carrying ice she asked” may I have some ice” the man agreed and gave Hello kitty some ice. When she found a spot she started to build her ice castle but when she had finished there was a drip drip drip at the door. She asked “who is it” the person replied the big bad Ronald McDonald now let me in no no no not by the hair of my chinny chin chin. The big bad Ronald McDonald growled “ then ill huff and ill puff and ill blow your castle house down but she didn’t let him in. So as the big bad Ronald McDonald he huffed and puffed and he blew and blew but it didn’t work. Then the big bad Ronald McDonald found a big chimney on the ice castle so he climbed down there but he didn’t realise there was a hot pot of hot water. The big bad Ronald McDonald could not climb up he kept slipping until he fell into the pot and guess what there must been a delicious meal in the castle that night and Hello Kitty lived happily ever after. By Katelin

Candy Land But Not On Earth! The moon starred at me gaining more goose bumps.My heart was a Ferrari going to fast to keep up with.My stomach was an escalator. I approached the cold steel rail. I gazed out the tinted window and looked out at the rusty old rundown side of the spaceship and read the following “Daedalus.” An ice age cold hand touched my shoulder and as i turned around I approached a green head dude with goofy glasses with white lipstick on. The dude entered a code on the padlock and turned while smiling entered through the door. Just as I started to enter a hovercraft chair past me as fast as a cheetahs.“ You coming” said the dude as I finally entered my room. Awesome I yelled in my head a I gazed carefully at a flying bed that was floating so well that I thought it was a ghost bed. Suddenly, I saw a black scary shadow appear out of the bathroom. The shadow turned out to be a skinny chick with a pink curly hairdo with teeth as white as a pearl necklace. “Here take it shorty small legs, you might need it.” “It is a Z phone you can log into any room of the ship.” “It also has kid pix, network, mail and basically all the technology in one and can turn into anything you want.” Then she disappeared into a room but it wasn’t long before she came back with one enormous present. She handed them to me like they were so delicate that she didn’t let go until I had them in my scrawny hands. Unwrapping the present I saw a key holder then all of sudden a pair of keys fell from the hovercraft shaped space ship car thing and also a furry tail appeared. I anxiously unravelled the rest of the rapping paper so shocked to find a floating car as shiny as a paua shell. Then to my surprise I heard a rattling sound behind me so turned around and saw a baby monkey playing with my keys. I thought why would I need a monkey but oh well its cute and that I all that matters. 5km now 10km and I got used to it I stopped and started and went full speed which was 50km per hour. My eyes didn’t blink when I found myself in the middle of an action packed room of noise created by a zoo of animals. The brand new sign above shimmered from the dangling lights ahead. Suddenly my eyes were fixed to animal cruelty when I saw a half monkey/fish/unicorn and as I slightly tinted my head to the left I saw water bright transparent water. I recognized that they had swimming with the animals from different planets. So after seeing that I hover crafted over to the swimming animals. I saw that there was a diving suit in my size so I snatched the diving suit of the hook and changed as quick as a costume change when you are live n concert. Then all of a sudden I remembered I had to write a letter to my parents so I took off the diving suit and raced to my room and wrote Dear Mum, Dad and family This is amazing space. The planets are gorgeous and fascinating to look at. I miss you so much and I love you so much. Love from Katelin xoxox Then all of a sudden there was an alarm going of so loud that I fell out of my chair and spelt all of my stationary on the ground. Suddenly Bang Bish Bam Boo Baa!!! We stood up ever so slowly in fact as slow as a turtle since my head a really really really bad headache. I had a 5inch swollen cut with puss pouring out from every direction on my leg. We quickly sprinted to the emergency exit door and grabbed a space suit regard what size it was. Even though we were in so much agony we needed to have a look outside and see where we had crashed and where our ship members are? Ever so slowly I pulled at the metal door and opened it with lots of hesitation. I at the raro lying there and the icing floating there and the lollipops dangling there. Lucy my roommate and I took small steps on to the candy land while not even looking where were standing cause we were staring at the mouth watering candy that I made a pool of silver. Luckily we couldn’t stay because the ship had only a dent in the door which let the air out which made the rest of the 178 passengers pass away. Dear Katelin I have some bad news. Your mother was a sacrifice to go into the iceland volcano by the Maori troop. By the way I am sorry I nominated her she said she wanted to but I think she said while on her way up the volcano side that it was a joke but I couldn’t really hear her she was mumbling so sounded like thankyou so much for volunteering me. Love your Dad and your dead Mum xoxox So sadly Lucy and I were the only survivors left. So we hover crafted over to the door with sadness in our hearts and a hole in our hearts. We remembered something that minute though if nobody was alive what about the captain he will be dead to so it is up to us to fly the ship back home. We were so lucky though cause we had classes on how to fly Daedalus so we were completely filled from head to toe in experience on how to fly the ship. So without hesitation we quickly ran to the pilots flying control room and started up the harmless beast of space. The control room had loads of buttons like hundreds and thousands surrounding us. We gracefully started to fly the ship. It was amazing! We felt like we were playing a flying ship game at an arcade it was that easy! So much thoughts flew through my head on about us being on tv, being on the covers of magazines, interviews and become “space teens,” Lucy and Katelin. Then all of a sudden we had landed on Earth. There was lots of cheering outside the ship and suddenly the door opened and all we could see was people for africa, our body and hearts were a whole again and we were full of excitement. Then a tall man in a black tuxedo stood there with such a cheesy smile. He moved in a sudden second and shook our hands saying “Congratulations you have returned from Daedalus serving 30 years in space with only friends which seem to have passed away.” Suddenly everyone started asking questions and the world started spinning around and then all I could see was pitch black. By Katelin Bartlett

We are shinnig stars who are excited to learn!

Below we have also been taught to create a very desctriptive poem. This poem is a dimante. The dimante poem has 1 noun then 2 adjectives 3 verbs 4 nouns 3 verbs 2 adjectives and a opposite noun from the first noun. Here is my rain and mud dimante.

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